first draft double page spread for music magazine

this is my double page spread that i have produced. i have used many techniquies in this such as having a house style in my magazine and keping it throughout the magazine. i have used buzz words such as "exclusive" to make the article more appealing as if it is a once in a life time opportunity. This has not turned out the way that i wished it would because when i have poted it the colours have not come out the way i wanted, the blue writing looks purple and is not easy to read on here ad this is something that i must address.